I enjoyed this chapter, reading a little more about Jazz, and then getting Prowl's gender (LADY PROWL!). The only thing that made me stop was reading that first bit.
To me, it was... a little stilted and information heavy. I can't say I got anything out of it besides Soundwave + orphans, and in the spirit of being honest, the names threw me WAY off track for a moment.
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However, I'm interested in seeing what comes next, very much so. Keep it up!
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I enjoyed this chapter, reading a little more about Jazz, and then getting Prowl's gender (LADY PROWL!). The only thing that made me stop was reading that first bit.
To me, it was... a little stilted and information heavy. I can't say I got anything out of it besides Soundwave + orphans, and in the spirit of being honest, the names threw me WAY off track for a moment.
>.>
However, I'm interested in seeing what comes next, very much so. Keep it up!